This was my first time reading a shifter romance book in the paranormal department. I loved the idea.
Some scenes in the book would sizzle more if the dialog was written a little better.
The main character Suzie lacked detail. Who is Suzie? We kind of get a little bit of information of her past but not much. I know what she does for a living; writes romance books and runs a daycare/preschool. That stuff was just thrown into the book. Her family was thrown into the book and left us hanging on what happen and why. To many question and unfinished scenes in the book.
***If the character is going to be thick and curvy, please use a model that is thick and cury. I love a cover that matches the story***
However, I never give up on an author over one book. So I did try book two. Inwardly as I read book two I cringed. Both books felt rushed. Maybe some stories should not be short stories. I think the author has a great idea but needs to elaborate more, give us more.
Do I feel the price in justified for a very short incomplete story? No, I really do think the first book should be free or all three books should be a buddle pack.
I really felt like this was a waste of money.
Not sure if I want to read HERS. Maybe, just for closure.
Reviewed By: Michelle Thomas @mcthomas79
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