THREE STARS

I finally finished reading Desperately Undone. There were errors as what people say here in the states. Spoke with the Author and she now has a second edition to this story.  Over all I give this book 3 stars. The story moves very slowly. It’s hard for me to feel a connection with Bree and Michael. I think the connection was lost by adding in  Jo and Davis as first person in the story; pulling the reader away from Bree and Michael and creating too much drama.

Main characters did get tiring and repetitive by first person repeating what occurred. Overall the story had a great idea for a plot. Wording was good. Thus the ranking of 3 stars.

Chapter One is fantastic. I felt like I was in the room and could very easily feel what Bree was going through. Once Michael was introduced and it was clear what direction the story was going, I felt that there were scenes that did not need to be there as if the author was not sure how to show and have Bree and Michael really bond. Jo and Davis takes up a lot of the scenes and is not necessary in my opinion in the story as first person.

BUT! The idea of the plot was very well thought out.

~M~

FIVE STARS

I have no idea where to start expressing my wow astonishment towards this book. The story is amazing. Just when you think you know where the story is going you are wrong. I had one sneaking suspension about something that was occurring and I was right but wrong at the same time.

Do I see a part in the future for this book? Yes! Should there be a part two for this book? Yes! Will the writer make a part two? I have no idea.

Now when I am in love with a story I don’t write much about why I love the book to entice you to read it. Why? Because you just need to pick up the book and read it. Let the author take you down that road, not me.

Just remember this is DARK & TWISTED!

~M~

FIVE STARS

You are probably wondering why I give this short story 5 stars. First the plot is well thought out. Second the writer hooks me in the beginning. Now I am laughing at myself for using the word hook. Inside joke once you read the story. Third you can actually feel for Luna and her background. Fourth well worded. Fifth, the ending is perfect.

This is a short story and worth the ninety nine cents you will spend to read it.

The story will plagued your mind like the rest of Yolanda Olson’s stories.

~M~

Isn’t this just the prettiest darn thing you ever did see!! I want to lick it never mind read it. Ok well maybe not but you get the picture….right?

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On the Rocks (Last Call, Book #1)

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He left to travel the world for fame and glory, but only after spurning Gabby Ward and crushing her young heart. Now Hunter Markham has come back home to the sand and salty breeze of the North Carolina Outer Banks so he can open up Last Call, a beach bar nestled among the dunes of the Atlantic.

Gabby Ward is not happy that Hunter has returned. Bitter over his rebuff years before, she’s content to stay far away from him and his dangerously charming ways.

Gabby’s well-schemed plans to ignore Hunter go up in flames when he presents an offer to her that she simply can’t refuse, throwing them together in a common quest to each reach their goals. Working together day in and day out proves to be problematic for Gabby, who soon realizes that the feelings she had for him are still very much alive. Hunter struggles to reach through to Gabby’s cold heart, all while starting a new career away from his life as a top ranked, professional surfer.

What starts out as a mutual business arrangement soon turns into a passion that neither of them can continue to deny.

Hard choices lay ahead for both of them when Hunter is offered a once in a lifetime opportunity to return to the pro surfing tour.

Choices that could destroy what they have built or take them further than they ever had dared to hope.