I finally finished reading Desperately Undone. There were errors as what people say here in the states. Spoke with the Author and she now has a second edition to this story. Over all I give this book 3 stars. The story moves very slowly. It’s hard for me to feel a connection with Bree and Michael. I think the connection was lost by adding in Jo and Davis as first person in the story; pulling the reader away from Bree and Michael and creating too much drama.
Main characters did get tiring and repetitive by first person repeating what occurred. Overall the story had a great idea for a plot. Wording was good. Thus the ranking of 3 stars.
Chapter One is fantastic. I felt like I was in the room and could very easily feel what Bree was going through. Once Michael was introduced and it was clear what direction the story was going, I felt that there were scenes that did not need to be there as if the author was not sure how to show and have Bree and Michael really bond. Jo and Davis takes up a lot of the scenes and is not necessary in my opinion in the story as first person.
BUT! The idea of the plot was very well thought out.